A couple of days ago, some enemy forces were spotted near the Song Nha Ngu River. Once again, it was time to go on patrol. Our squad, led by Brunner, was assigned to make sure that no enemy forces slipped through. We were told that we wouldn't be engaging in heavy fighting. We loaded up into the choppers and got dropped off at the LZ. I didn't like the looks of the area when we got off. It was a perfect place for us to get ambushed again. Thoughts of the last injury I had received went through my mind. I didn't want it to happen again. We patrolled at least two kilometers of the area, following the bank of a stream. Suddenly as we were walking, a figure came up out of the water with a splash. It was a Cong! We opened fire and took him down. Then the whole stream was alive. There were Congs popping up everywhere. We fired as we retreated in confusion. Me and Peewee separated from the group to check the ridge, while the others continued to retreat to the LZ. The enemy fired on us as we crossed the river, but they didn't get us. Me and Peewee looked down from the ridge as we reached it and realized that there was many more of the enemy than we suspected. In the dark it seemed as if there was a million of them! I prayed that the others would be all right. Me and Peewee found a spider hole to hide in. It was small and cramped, but we stayed there all night. The next morning we got out of the hole and moved out to the LZ. We spottd some Congs on the way, but we weren't seen. As we approached the LZ, we saw Monaco sitting against a tree. We hid in the bushed, trying to figure out what was going on. I saw that there was a barrel pointed at his head from the trees. The Congs had captured him and were waiting for the choppers to arrive! As we heard the choppers coming, we opened fire, surprising the Congs. The choppers spotted the Congs and started firing too. Me and Peewee sprinted to Monaco and lifted him into the chopper. As I climbed in, a searing pain went through my leg. I was hit! The pain was so bad that I couldn't breathe. As I lay in the chopper, I saw that Peewee was hurt too. I hoped that we would make it.
I had been shot in the leg. It didn't require amputation or anything, but Peewee had to go into surgery. He's all right now, but his wound was serious enough to get him back home. They finally found my medical record. I'm going home! I'm finally out of this horrid place. It's like I told Monaco before. Over here in Nam, we're all dead. The only way to come back to life is to get back into the World again.
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good imagery. i love it. nice background it fits the story line. 10/10 yippee maybe i want to read it next time.
ReplyDeleteI see this is a book about war and historical events of the USA. Reading over your entries, it shows that you know your book pretty well. Maybe try to leave out the little details and stick to one point.
ReplyDeleteMarisa Santeco
Great job incorporating the historical context. The story seems really interesting. You seem to really know the book inside and out. I really felt like I could sympathize with this Vietnam War veteran.
ReplyDeleteJosie
I enjoyed reading this blog. I enjoyed the specific details since I am a fan of war stories. I enjoyed the pictures also. I might just have to read this book. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked your use of imagery: it felt like I was there with the soldiers. I also like the layout you used. It's formal and conservative enough, but it also shows personality. Overall, a great blog.
ReplyDeleteThe other Josi
you did really good! i normaly don't like war stories but i might have to check this one out. I think that it was the details that caught my attention the most.
ReplyDeleteawesome work! the action kept me on the edge of my seat! very good job! voice is amazing! details are great! it puts me in an adventerous mood! i think im gonna go hunt some butterflies with a watergun!!!
ReplyDeletecaspia!!
Didn't it hurt? It's so matter of fact!
ReplyDeleteI liked reading your blog. The pictures were cool. Good details and writing. Good job!
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